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Friday, 6 June 2014

My favourite person

My favourite person is my brother because he is funny and he makes me laugh and pushes me to learn harder and teaches me all the things he knows about my questions. I like my brother because he teaches me maths, reading and writing and I love my brother and he loves me even if he gets angry at me because I know that he is trying to teach me the right thing. My brother’s personality is kind and helpful and smart. My brother is smart because when he was a little kid like my age he keeps on reading a lot and he only uses a lantern. My brother is helpful because he helps me with everything, when I carry a heavy thing he takes of me and he carry’s it because he know that im skinny and light and weak because when I was a little kid I was always seek and unhealthy. My brother is an engineer and he and works next to the sky tower. My brother climbs up building and construction sites. One day in our country he was fixing something up in our house and my brother did not know that there was a rock underneath his ladder and he was trying to fix something on the side and he lost his balance and he fell of the ladder but luckily it was his back and the ground was soil not solid concrete but some of his bones a were broken. When my brother and my anti came here there job was working in a bread factory and his workmates are mean to them so my brother found a perfect job for him and my aunt also found two jobs. This is my favourite person because he loves me and does everything for me.

2 comments:

  1. I love your work its organised and loving I hope your brother is fine and that's the same as my brother but you keep repeating and you did't put paragraphs but I can picture in my head what he looks like.

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  2. Your work is really loving and heart warming keep up the good work Paolo.

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